Monday, September 21, 2020

The environment is our responsibility

 We were learning about making a sample of persuasive writing in a "WEEK" so I had a lot pressure on me even though I have done persuasive writing this whole trem but I had pressure on me the entire week.

I found it easy to edit my writing because I noticed a small amount of mistakes and I added more sentences cause my paragraphs were a bit small.

I found it challenging to to let go of my worries of my writing because maybe the teachers found something wrong that I didn't notice or one of my sentences were wrong and I didn't know about this "sentence" in my writing.

Next time I will make bigger because it wasn't my longest story I've written because some the paragraphs were very short and it didn't have a lot of describing words.

Thursday, September 10, 2020

Should we ban Milk at Awapuni

 We were learning about how to do persuasive writing

I found it easy to make my plan in my book

I found it challenging to turn my plan into a persuasive piece of writing

Next time I will make a longer piece of persuasive writing

Wednesday, September 2, 2020

Carter


I found it easy to find the to make this project.

I found it challenging to get all those screencastify videos of my favorite songs.

Next time I will put more info in my slides about me