We were learning how to write a moment in time but not in our life about in a Squirrel or a Hawks life .
I found it easy to make my story humaruos to make it a good story and have a different way of writing a story.
I found it hard to add more full stops into my story then before .
Next time I will make a more descriptive story about the Hawk or the Squirrel.
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