What were you learning about? I was learning how to personify a sunflower in a poem.
What did you enjoy? I enjoyed decorating the slide so it would look decent.
What was challenging? I found it challenging to gett the poem correct because I was writing it more like a story so it didn't sound like a poem.
What was easy? It was easy to get the writing and publishing it on the slide was really easy.
What will you do next time? Next time I'll try to make it rhyme because I think poems that rhyme.
Hi carter I love your poem about sunflowers it reminds me about my poem about sunflowers its similar to mine but next time you could maybe change the colour of your writing and next time you could change the background but overall its great have a good day carter.
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ReplyDeleteI really like the way you added a descriptive words into your writing.
I like the way you said "Crying pollen floats away" it was very describing.
Next time maybe check your spelling and making your sentences make sense.