Monday, September 6, 2021

Crab persuasive writing

  this is "convince my Mom to let me have a pet Crabs" persuasive writing  and the reason I made piece of writing because I want my Mom let me have pet Crabs and the reason I want pet crabs is because I want to study then observe them for my career and also there so cool I did find it hard to find facts that would probably convince my Mom.Into giving me permission to have pet Crabs.It was super easy to finish quickly enough to show her before bella (my sister) to start other maths activity.Next time I will definitely make it like at least two or three sentences longer so thats my Crab persuasive writing. 


      Crabs persuasive writing 


  this is "convince my Mom to let me have a pet Crabs" persuasive writing  and the reason I made piece of writing because I want my Mom let me have pet Crabs and the reason I want pet crabs is because I want to study then observe them for my career and also there so cool

Mom if we get a pet crab you won’t worry that it will die straight away because they live three to four years

we will also give then bait fish to eat and we can also earn more money because mud crabs have up to 2

million egg when they hatch will put them in a separate jar then when they get bigger we will sell then 50

cents each and you will get 50% of the money to so we have fun while you get over ten dollars also also

we can feed the babies worms because they like them also with the money we get we will get more jars to raise more mud crabs that means you get more money so its a win win and also I can use the other

fridge to keep them damp.



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