Hi this is my piece of creative writing. We were learning to have obsessive description when I was writing this so it feels like you in my story with me and comment if it was like that. It was extremely hard to find a background I had a robot running but it looked awkward. So then I got a animated guy running but Toby said it would be distracting. So changed it into Olympic people running and that turned out well.It was easy to write the real piece of writing because I am pretty good at describing.Next time I will create a larger piece of recount writing and to make make it more describing of how I feeled Bye bye.
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